DYM pitch feedback

Hi Sheena

Just to recap on the main points of your presentation feedback:

1. Refine the family relationship in the film: children lose their parents when young and go to live with grandparents. Gfather was an explorer/adventurer? disappears. SOme years later, Gmother dies. Eldest sisters sorts through memory box and finds the map.

2. Give your characters and setting a British film context: think about different age and race representations.

3. Make sure that you have thought about your plot synopsis in terms of Todorov's 3 part structure.